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  • Short Story » General, General Re: A Deadly Occupation [contest entry]

    Ahoy matey!:o Bunny here to review. *insert maniacal laughter* First impression: Ranger, do took this prompt in a very interesting, charming, and funny direction. I love the idea of a ...

    Jun 26, 2011
  • Short Story » Science Fiction, General Re: System Push (REVISED)

    Hello, darling! Bunny here to review. :3 What first tipped me off to begin reading this piece was the title, so good call on that one. I always have difficulty ...

    Jun 26, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, General Re: Elephant Nose: Intro (Revised)

    Hello darling! I am so terribly sorry for the super long wait. A lot of...crazy stuff has been going on since you requested this review, and while it's certainly no ...

    Jun 18, 2011
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: nothing friendly, nothing pleasant

    Hey, Janika. :3 Here as requested. So, my overall impression of this poem was "Oh god." It's such a harsh subject, that I was surprised...but intrigued. It takes some guts ...

    Jun 13, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, General Re: Elephant Nose: Intro

    Hello, dear. :) Instantly, the title of this piece caught my attention. While after reading I still haven't the faintest idea what it has to do with the story line, ...

    May 29, 2011
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Guardians of the Heart

    Hurr hurr. Bunny here to review as requested. *cracks knuckles* Ok, overall, I like the idea here. It's an original take on the average "boy meets girl" circumstance, and I ...

    May 5, 2011
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: Jack and the Exorcist - Part Two

    Ah, you've done it again, Paul. :D The first thing that drew me in was the promising title, and I'm glad I ventured to read this. Since I'm lame, I'm ...

    May 1, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Hades & Company - Prologue

    Bunny here to review. ;) Bweh heh heh... Ok, first off: buckets o' brownie points for opening with a Vonnegut quote. You wanna make me happy? Quote Vonnegut. That aside, ...

    Apr 29, 2011
  • Short Story » General, General Re: The Vampire Upstairs

    Hiya Tr3x! Sorry it took me this long to get around to reviewing. ^^' So, my first impression of this was that is was really cute and funny. It's nice ...

    Apr 27, 2011
  • Script » General, General Re: Freya's Replacement (Episode 1)

    Ahoy!:D Bunny here for a review as requested. Ok, so first impression time (aka thoughts towards the work as a whole): As I said before, I'm not a script expert, ...

    Mar 11, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Realms & Adventures of the Ancient's Court

    Hello:] Bunny here to review. Okay, so overall impressions: Your grammar was mostly very clear and consistent which made reading this bearable, and you didn't have any weird spelling mistakes ...

    Mar 5, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: The Painter's Daughter

    Ahoy! Bunny here to review. :3 So, I'm really glad I read this, because it was a pleasant breath of fresh air. I think the idea you have for this ...

    Mar 3, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: Patience chapter 1

    Hello. Bunny here reviewing as requested. :} I want to prelude this with an apology. Honestly, I wasn't able to get much farther than the third paragraph. The reason had ...

    Mar 2, 2011
  • Short Story » General, General Re: No title yet

    Hello! Bunny here for your first review. *muah haha* Erm, yes. So, first impressions of your piece. I'm gonna point out the painfuly obvious and inform you of the thing ...

    Mar 1, 2011
  • Other » General, General Re: Mal

    Ahoy:3 Your friendly neighborhood bunny here to provide a lame review! Rock on. So, first impressions: I want to read this story. Already, I'm growing fond of your characters, and ...

    Feb 27, 2011


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