ThatWriterGuy

Nice prologue! This is really interesting and I was hooked after the first few lines. You MUST publish more chapters! I want to be introduced to the main character! The ...

hello there! I read the first chapter and was fairly intrigued with the world you were building. Although, there were some major issues with this chapter which I would like ...

Hello Judas! It's me, That Writer Guy. This is one of your early works and you were young so i won't criticize you for any writing style errors. First off, ...

Nice! This is good. I shall definitely read the next chapter, i think this shall turn out to be good. However, I do think that you may have pinched some ...

Hello! I read chapter 1 at first and really enjoyed it, I didn't realize there was a prologue! This is an excellent short introduction to set the tone of your ...

This really helped! Thank you so much! I want to start a new novel and all of these questions really helped me get the answers I was looking for. i ...

I LOVE this. I really want to read more. i hope you continue with this. I like hthe way you write this, always suspenseful etc. This is bestseller level stuff-no ...

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Nice! I like it! I really want to read more. However, maybe you could use longer sentences? Use short sentences for impact and when describing use longer ones, otherwise it ...