ThatAndalite

I love the whole thing between the road-runner and the lizard, hahaha. xD But the creature that had it for lunch, it's confusing me. Feline eyes? And it picks up ...

Beautiful, but really sad. You really think people only care when you're dead, but really people care all the time. I'm sorry you feel/felt this way, and I've actually been ...

Beautiful. Amazing. Is there any way to describe it other than that? Meaningful, deep-in-thought, the type of thing that brings a tear to your eye? It honestly reminds me of ...

Love, love, love the repetition! See what I did there, haha? But any-who, I noticed in the line (That's not all it brings with it's moisturous drops) that you used ...

I wondered if conspiring against your band mate was a law? If it wasn't, then it should've been. You mean against the law? I noticed that as far as mistakes, ...

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I double-posted again. Oops.

I only got around to reading chapter one, but in my op, this is an excellent read! I didn't spot a lot of mistakes (and the ones I did were ...

Pretty good, but I had (and still have) no idea of what's going on. Sort of. I know this wolf and his king are going to be after this girl ...

"Alright, guys, go back to class! Remember, stay nerdy" Cook yells and holds up the V. ^Insert comma after "stay nerdy" "How about the talent show? Are any of you ...

Ugh, such a cliffhanger - I want to know more! ;_; But it was amazing. I loved your writing style, but one thing bugged me - why were you using ...

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Oof, double-send. Something's wrong with this computer.

I couldn't turn away from this work! It was chilling, fantastic, an ultimate gripper.