Terry

Sorry, I've been a bit busy. I'll try to review this as soon as I can!

Actually, you were using periods in your writing. A period is this mark here: . Periods, . , are used to mark the end of a sentence. You had them ...

I'll leave a review. This is rather short, but I feel it works this way. Your writing is very strong. Your dialogue conveys a good sense of the personality, and ...

Thanks for the review! You had some good points. I'll edit it accordingly. :)

Thanks for the review! I'll take what you said into consideration.