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  • Other » General, Narrative Re: The Echoes of Summer

    Hey Mage! Thank you for the review! I'm glad you liked some parts of it. It looks like I fell short a lot by not defining the characters better so ...

    Sep 15, 2020
  • Other » General, Narrative Re: The Echoes of Summer

    Hey StudentAH, Thank you for the review! I do really like that idea of having the different messages in different font colours, that could be really cool to play with ...

    Sep 15, 2020
  • Other » General, Narrative Re: The Echoes of Summer

    Hey RavenLord Thank you for the review! I hadn't actually considered the specific writers of each message to be important, I guess it was meant to be more of an ...

    Sep 15, 2020
  • Poetry » General, General Re: You are Not a Part of Me

    Thank you for the review! I'm really glad you liked it < 3 I very much appreciate feedback on super fine tuning my word choices so I'll definitely take those ...

    Jun 15, 2020
  • Poetry » General, General Re: You are Not a Part of Me

    @Alliyah Thank you for the review < 3 The "we are not reborn through ashes" part is my favourite, I'm glad you picked it out! Re: "I live to prove ...

    Jun 15, 2020
  • Poetry » General, General Re: You are Not a Part of Me

    Hey RememberTheAniur! Thank you for the review! I wanted to make a lot of use of the metaphors so I'm glad you liked it =D

    Jun 3, 2020
  • Poetry » General, General Re: You are Not a Part of Me

    Hi Chris! Thank you for the review. I don't think I understood a few of your comments. You mention my use of colour... 'colour' is the English spelling of the ...

    Jun 3, 2020
  • Poetry » General, General Re: You are Not a Part of Me

    Hey Sulagna! Thank you for your review =D I appreciate it a lot. 'Colour' is the original English spelling of the word, rather than the American English version which is ...

    Jun 3, 2020
  • Poetry » General, General Re: You are Not a Part of Me

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    Jun 2, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Narrative Re: The Demon Lord and His Empty Heaven

    Ah, that makes a bit more sense! In that case it might be worth adding a really brief summary mentioning it at the top of the post. Kind of like ...

    May 26, 2020
  • Lyrics » Lyrical, General Re: go home

    You recorded that on your phone? Hahaha. Hey, if it works, it works! XD

    May 8, 2020
  • Lyrics » Lyrical, General Re: go home

    Jeeeez, Sound. This is something quite incredible. I would totally buy this if it was on an album, the composition and vocals are amazing and it's so clean it sounds ...

    May 8, 2020
  • Poetry » General, Health Re: an acknowledgement

    This is such a beautiful poem. Thank you for posting < 3

    Apr 13, 2020
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: nineteen

    This is a good poem. Personally I tend to find I enjoy a broad variety of styles, but what draws me in is the substance behind it. Here the substance ...

    Jan 2, 2020
  • Poetry » General, General Re: The Geese Are Back & I'm Thinking of You

    Hey Fort < 3 This is stylistically quite different to your other works, and I'm curious! I'm used to your writing being quite thick with sensory metaphors and descriptions, but ...

    Jan 2, 2020


pain is that feeling when you are feeling hurt, but it never goes away leaving me hurt. oh it hurts.
— Dragonthorn