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Re: The Echoes of Summer
Hey Mage! Thank you for the review! I'm glad you liked some parts of it. It looks like I fell short a lot by not defining the characters better so ...
Sep 15, 2020 -
Re: The Echoes of Summer
Hey StudentAH, Thank you for the review! I do really like that idea of having the different messages in different font colours, that could be really cool to play with ...
Sep 15, 2020 -
Re: The Echoes of Summer
Hey RavenLord Thank you for the review! I hadn't actually considered the specific writers of each message to be important, I guess it was meant to be more of an ...
Sep 15, 2020 -
Re: You are Not a Part of Me
Thank you for the review! I'm really glad you liked it < 3 I very much appreciate feedback on super fine tuning my word choices so I'll definitely take those ...
Jun 15, 2020 -
Re: You are Not a Part of Me
@Alliyah Thank you for the review < 3 The "we are not reborn through ashes" part is my favourite, I'm glad you picked it out! Re: "I live to prove ...
Jun 15, 2020 -
Re: You are Not a Part of Me
Hey RememberTheAniur! Thank you for the review! I wanted to make a lot of use of the metaphors so I'm glad you liked it =D
Jun 3, 2020 -
Re: You are Not a Part of Me
Hi Chris! Thank you for the review. I don't think I understood a few of your comments. You mention my use of colour... 'colour' is the English spelling of the ...
Jun 3, 2020 -
Re: You are Not a Part of Me
Hey Sulagna! Thank you for your review =D I appreciate it a lot. 'Colour' is the original English spelling of the word, rather than the American English version which is ...
Jun 3, 2020 -
Re: You are Not a Part of Me
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Jun 2, 2020 -
Re: The Demon Lord and His Empty Heaven
Ah, that makes a bit more sense! In that case it might be worth adding a really brief summary mentioning it at the top of the post. Kind of like ...
May 26, 2020 -
Re: go home
You recorded that on your phone? Hahaha. Hey, if it works, it works! XD
May 8, 2020 -
Re: go home
Jeeeez, Sound. This is something quite incredible. I would totally buy this if it was on an album, the composition and vocals are amazing and it's so clean it sounds ...
May 8, 2020 -
Re: an acknowledgement
This is such a beautiful poem. Thank you for posting < 3
Apr 13, 2020 -
Re: nineteen
This is a good poem. Personally I tend to find I enjoy a broad variety of styles, but what draws me in is the substance behind it. Here the substance ...
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Re: The Geese Are Back & I'm Thinking of You
Hey Fort < 3 This is stylistically quite different to your other works, and I'm curious! I'm used to your writing being quite thick with sensory metaphors and descriptions, but ...
Jan 2, 2020
