Tenyo

I agree with the former review, this is a wonderful poem. One of the hardest things to do is so calmly reflect on things of the past, especially those that ...

Greetings! First note: I like your signature, especially noticing it after reading lyrics. The Lyrics are good. I know it's always hard to read/review them without an idea of the ...

This is adorable! It's a very, very short story, but I think that works. My main suggestion would be to push all those questions at the top into one paragraph, ...

Ooh, interesting characters! I love them! They're both so radically different and at the same time they both seem to have that air of danger around them that makes them ...

Hey AngelKnight! (I like that name by the way.) This is a really cute piece! I haven't read the other chapters but by the end of this one I still ...

Hey Noelle The thing I like most about this piece is the dynamics between the characters introduced. They seem like the kind of group everybody would want to be friends ...

Hey Qara! I agree with Demoness, the imagery in this piece is wonderful! The only issue I had was that there was a bit too much abstract. I kind of ...

Hey Scar! This is awesome! It's brilliantly creative and beautifully simple. I love the personification of the lion. Especially a vegan lion, I imagine it to be a hard character ...

Hey Hermione137. This is a good start. You've captured my interest in this character despite such a quiet opening, which is good. I can see what your intention is and ...

Hey Techo! I'm afraid I haven't read the previous chapters, so I can't say much about the plot right now. First the Council of the Elders: This is chapter three, ...

Ah, Jemjive, hello! I agree with Skorpe, I love the metaphor and imagery in this. If I must pick at something though I have to say that where the first ...

Hey tigershark! At first I did like this poem. I think you've done a rally good job of expressing the emotion in it. The problem I had though is that ...

Hey there Perse! There were things in this that didn't make sense much to me, I think it might be due to some poetic habits of yours. For example, in ...

Ello again. Not to give a fluffy review, but I love this story so far. It's tense, emotional, and gripping. About your writing in general, I really like your descriptions, ...

Hey Skins! To be brief, this is a great introduction for Zoey. Like your other characters she quite vivid, and stands apart well as her own identity, especially compared to ...