TenToTheFourth

This is a strong start! I don't know if it's a short story, or the first chapter of a novel, but I could see it working as either. The intro ...

This chapter was funny and a good continuation of the story. The discussion of Rachel's parents' role in her life choices was good satire: exaggerated for effect but nevertheless containing ...

This is powerful. The ambiguous ending works really well: there are always a few people who fade out of one's view after high school. This piece captures the emotional struggles ...

The action here is pretty epic. I really enjoyed reading, and the imagery was, for the most part, solid. You definitely don't make the mistake of rushing through the action ...

I love this piece. With so much emphasis these days on our insignificance and impermanence, and fear as a result, I like how the speaker desires to be at peace ...

Well written. I had to read it twice to get the meaning. My understanding is that the entire poem is a double entendre which refers simultaneously to an act of ...

This is an interesting idea. I like the comparison involving the pork chops at the beginning to delicacies in other parts of the world. As well as being funny, you ...