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Re: Chionophobia #39 /P
Son of a -----! So Jonathan's in danger huh? *Sarah slammed the door and clicked the locks into place. Kyle suddenly felt very aware of everything in the hallway: its ...
Mar 7, 2007 -
Re: Kiss the Damsel Chapter 10
*Tina claps* hold on a minute *she laughs hysterically* love it! please add more quickly!! oh btw Jane gasped, “We’ve been blackmailed.” i dont think blackmail really works there... maybe ...
Mar 3, 2007 -
Re: The Child called it
yeah i loved that book to! actually i read all three in when i was in eigth grade so they have kinda blend together and i dont really remember which ...
Feb 24, 2007 -
Re: Embers
oooo 0_0 fire! i really like this poem, espesially the lines in between. That was what he wanted me to see. The only person fooled was me. this one is ...
Feb 23, 2007 -
Re: Faith Amrita
Awsome! you have such a talent for description! i could picture everything perfectly in my mind. even with some of the best writers that can be a problem. I honestly ...
Feb 23, 2007 -
Re: Kiss the Damsel Chapter 1
You read too many romantic fiction books. lmao Well i loved it! it was really good. one or two grammatical errors but overall, awsome! i will be looking for more! ...
Feb 21, 2007 -
Re: Dragon Fire
Good begining. I would suggest making it bit more exciting though. Not much, just something to make the reader want to keep reading, something that really draws them in. I ...
Feb 21, 2007
