TellATaleForTwo

I cant beleive i never commented on this before! I just wanted to let you know that i read this forever ago. around the time i first startde coming to ...

OK, I'm just gonna get down to business. I was in the way back of the shop, beyond piles of boxes and copy machines, which a lone light shining down ...

Very nice! I believe I've mentioned this before, but I like your choice in vocabulary. Also, this chapter was very descriptive. A nice balance of story telling and imagery. AND ...

OK! I finally got to finish it! This was really good! I espesially like the end of the chapter. I was genuinely surprised. Why did Amelia's car get trashed? I ...

*looks stoned* niiiiiiiiiiccccceeeeee :D :D :D :D :D :D

Hey SASSYLADY! I just wanted to say that i really liked this! It's a spin-off from the last Superman movie right? I think that was a good idea, though i ...

Ok, i liked this a lot! You could tell it had a lot of meaning and depth behind it, but I think you went a little too fast. The ending ...

Ok, this chapter does need a bit of work. You're right about that, but, you are wrong that its too much info all at once. i think the pace you ...

Sorry it took so long for me to comment! Its a rare thing for me to be around a computer these days. Well, the story is great as always! cant ...

This is really good Matt! This is my favorite part: Chorus: Fire, spread across the land Fire, held inside my hand Fire, bringing light to dark Fire burn, the inner ...

She decided to wake Maviance and have her accompany her downstairs, change her to him other than that, it was awsome! Once again your vocabulary amazes me! Which makes the ...

I like this Luna! there were only three things that bothered me: One that guarded the rotting body of a young woman nary eighteen who had died upon giving birth ...

*twitch* twitch* lol that was really good! a few grammatical errors and some (small) things that im kinda confused about, but that's probably just me so i'll talk to you ...

:shock: lol... umm... ok....... :roll: :)

i liked what you were saying in the poem, but it came off as if you were just telling your feelings/ thoughts/ events in an... "unorganized" way, though i dont ...