Teddybear

You do that.

Yeah, I figured it might be an OC because the name wasn't familiar, but DC is such a huge universe and there's no way I could possibly know every character ...

Hey! So I'm back and glad you liked it. I'm not going to answer any of your questions now so you can get your answers through reading the story and ...

Thanks for the comment, even if it is LESS relevant than it would have been when I first posted this. It helps regardless. I'll go read your other review now ...

I'm glad you were amused. (that might sound sarcastic or condescending or something, but it's not, I promise)

Thanks for the advice.

Hey, thanks for coming over to review this chapter as well as the last one (a lot of people read one chapter and just stop with the story, which I ...

Thanks for the review! I did have my doubts about the pacing and it's good to hear that it wasn't just my personal insecurity and paranoia (I didn't want to ...

You're welcome, I'll try to integrate more of this explanation into the actual work so no one has to look into it or have me explain it like this. Among ...

Thanks for this review as well, I'll go back a little later and add some more interesting stuff later on, maybe...you know what? You'll find out. But I will make ...

Thanks for the review! I'll probably be breaking this into two parts, as you said because I agree that this is a little longer than it should be. This was ...

Thanks! I'm glad you liked it. Would you like to read more from this universe? Not specifically these characters, though I may bring back Avery and/or Andie, you probably won't ...

Thank you for the clarification, but it may be easier to understand if you made small changes, like adding a quick descriptor for "him", even just his name and the ...

Thanks for the help. I think I can explain the rapid decrease in quality as my just being too tired to use a keyboard when I wrote it, and this ...

I will too, I've got the whole thing outlined, though, so it's not like I'm going to forget what I was doing once I get back to it. My mum ...