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Re: Colors (Chapter 1)
Hello hello my dear. So, here' the deal, I live in a house with too many people where we don't have wifi, but when I'm at coffee shops and the ...
Mar 6, 2019 -
Re: Crocuses
Hi, I'm just going to get this disclaimer out of the way first, I don't usually read stuff like this. I tend to stick in the fantasy/sci-fi/ etc. area's, so ...
Mar 5, 2019 -
Re: Thief's Penance
Hello hello, tis I, a random person you've most likely never heard of but whose advice you will probably consider anyway! But in all seriousness, I've been writing almost as ...
Mar 2, 2019 -
Re: The Prophecy Revealed Chapter 2.1
I haven't read anything before this chapter, so forgive my ignorance of previously established plot points, that said, I will be attempting to vaguely review this work. Yay! Okay, so, ...
Feb 24, 2019 -
Re: Jittery
Hey, I'll confess that I don't have much exprerence with poetry as a whole. That said, this is really good, in my uneducated opinion. /you didn't have a super strong ...
Feb 23, 2019 -
Re: The Prophecy Revealed Chapter 1
Wow is this long. Okay, I'm gonna review this work of yours, but first, I have a few confessions to make. First and formost, I don't usually read romance. I ...
Feb 22, 2019 -
Re: Math
Hey! I'm not super experienced when it comes to poetry, so bear with me here as I attempt to review this piece. Now that that little disclaimer is out of ...
Feb 21, 2019 -
Re: Atravesar
Hello, I'm Mae, here to review this work. Forgive any arrors I make, it's been a while since I've written anything of substance, so take my words with a grain ...
Feb 21, 2019 -
Re: White As Snow
Hey, it's been a while since I've had time to post a review, so please, if you would be so kind as to forgive my lack of fluidity and solid ...
Feb 19, 2019 -
Re: Trial of Tears
Hey! I was going through your portfolio because I follow you and stuff and I saw this only had two reviews, which isn't uncommon, it's just kinda unfortunate, so I'm ...
Jan 2, 2019 -
Re: Is It Love?
Hey! Full disclosure, I don't usually review poetry. I write a little, but that does not mean I know what I'm doing, and thus, I really don't know what I'm ...
Jan 2, 2019 -
Re: Chapter Four: A Boon
Hey! So, usually I'd do a pretty long paragraph by paragraph reviews, but I don't have time for that right this second, so I'll just give you the general stuff. ...
Dec 30, 2018 -
Re: Alvarado Final
Hey! So, this story started good and kept it up throughout, good job! My only real issue is the slow pacing. Maybe it's just down to personal taste, but not ...
Dec 30, 2018 -
Re: The Fallen God Chapter 1 (pretty rough draft)
Hi! I'm going to do this the way I have been recently neglecting, and go paragraph by paragraph then give you my general opinions at the end. Okie Dokie, paragraph ...
Dec 20, 2018 -
Re: To Be Continued
Hello, hello, my writer friend! I will be attempting to review this beautiful piece of artwork today! Hopefully... So, I usually go paragraph by paragraph then give the general stuff ...
Dec 18, 2018
