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Re: chase
Hey Jack, Sorry 1st 1 didn't count as a review so I am extending it and revising it. First off I'd like to say that I like how you started ...
Mar 14, 2016 -
Re: Haun lan
Hey Gema, This is a great story that is not far from mine. But I'm not here to talk about me, I'm here to talk about you and your story(not ...
Mar 14, 2016 -
Re: of empires and stomachaches
Dear Autumns, Techpotter123 here to review. I would call it amazing but that would be too obvious. That is exactly how I feel whenever I have a stomachache. Your line ...
Mar 10, 2016 -
Re: Snow Flurries and Another Storybook
This is a very touching poem. The way you rhymed "We exit the store (with books in hand) and through the snow we stroll a little more, you take me ...
Mar 10, 2016 -
Re: Rice
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Mar 1, 2016
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