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  • Short Story » Historical Fiction, Action / Adventure Re: chase

    Hey Jack, Sorry 1st 1 didn't count as a review so I am extending it and revising it. First off I'd like to say that I like how you started ...

    Mar 14, 2016
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Haun lan

    Hey Gema, This is a great story that is not far from mine. But I'm not here to talk about me, I'm here to talk about you and your story(not ...

    Mar 14, 2016
  • Poetry » Politics, Humor Re: of empires and stomachaches

    Dear Autumns, Techpotter123 here to review. I would call it amazing but that would be too obvious. That is exactly how I feel whenever I have a stomachache. Your line ...

    Mar 10, 2016
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: Snow Flurries and Another Storybook

    This is a very touching poem. The way you rhymed "We exit the store (with books in hand) and through the snow we stroll a little more, you take me ...

    Mar 10, 2016
  • Short Story » Historical Fiction, General Re: Rice

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    Mar 1, 2016


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