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Re: A Piece of Life
Hey Trin! Wow! I had noooo idea!!! I'm speechless! This is incredible! I love how you made the story yours and used cool metaphors and similes to get the point ...
Apr 21, 2015 -
Re: A Bucket of Paint
Hi Tiger! I just had to say that this piece is truly radical. I really appreciate the strong word choice in the story. I'd also like to point out how ...
Apr 21, 2015 -
Re: An Ode to Google
I liked how the piece was fun and joyful. It really made me appreciate google(haha). Overall, grammar was pretty on point. Your word choice was appropriate for the text and ...
Apr 20, 2015 -
Re: The Recounting
Wow. Not what I'd expected. I really like how the ending was different and how it kind of shocked me. I really thought that the mom was just lying and ...
Apr 20, 2015 -
Re: Have you met, my friends, the stars?
This poem is incredible. You truly have a gift. I just have to say that the lines: "The stars will hear them, never falter. No need to kneel before the ...
Apr 20, 2015
