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TealElephant

  • Short Story » Dramatic, Other Re: A Piece of Life

    Hey Trin! Wow! I had noooo idea!!! I'm speechless! This is incredible! I love how you made the story yours and used cool metaphors and similes to get the point ...

    Apr 21, 2015
  • Short Story » General, General Re: A Bucket of Paint

    Hi Tiger! I just had to say that this piece is truly radical. I really appreciate the strong word choice in the story. I'd also like to point out how ...

    Apr 21, 2015
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: An Ode to Google

    I liked how the piece was fun and joyful. It really made me appreciate google(haha). Overall, grammar was pretty on point. Your word choice was appropriate for the text and ...

    Apr 20, 2015
  • Short Story » Narrative, General Re: The Recounting

    Wow. Not what I'd expected. I really like how the ending was different and how it kind of shocked me. I really thought that the mom was just lying and ...

    Apr 20, 2015
  • Poetry » Spiritual, Dramatic Re: Have you met, my friends, the stars?

    This poem is incredible. You truly have a gift. I just have to say that the lines: "The stars will hear them, never falter. No need to kneel before the ...

    Apr 20, 2015


“Hope” is the thing with feathers - That perches in the soul - And sings the tune without the words - And never stops - at all -
— Emily Dickinson