Teague

Many thanks to Angela for the one critique... *pokes the countless others whom I solicited for crits* Anyway, the next few bits are pretty long, so I'll post them individually. ...

A small continuation of the beginning, sorry if it's a bad cut-off point. And it's probably mondo confusing because it's NaNo stuff, and well, eh. You can fill in the ...

I liked this. I couldn't find any mistakes, and the way you wrote it was good. When is more coming? Probably when NaNo's been underway for about a week.

Yes, post it in sections. Glad you thought of that, since I forgot to mention it. xD And you're welcome, of course. -St. Razorblade The Official YWS Pirate :pirate3:

I repeat, even though it happened to you, it's not commonplace. No one wants to read about an overly successful six-year-old. Too perfect. Doesn't happen often. Your characters in a ...

Scott Westerfeld. Let me check the spelling on that. Edit: Yup, that's him.

O.o The title alone is enough. Holy flying crackers. *adds to overly long list of books to find at the library*

"Who needs cutting when there's Calculus?" ;)

1984 is the best book ever written. Period.

Aagh! Typo. That was not supposed to be there. *fixes* Glad you guys liked it. It was just a random exercise I decided to do; fit as much info as ...

Excuse me?! Hey, I said "sometimes." :p

This is not writing, dear. Two words does not non-fiction make. *flags a mod to move this*

Woo for run on sentences! :D -St. Razorblade :pirate3:

I'll have to find these at my local library. I quite enjoyed the first in his Midnighter series. He's a good writer. *makes a mental note*

How can you have bold waves? You're explaining them as if they have charecteristics, but they don't. Maybe some of the stronger waves would be better? The footsteps or the ...