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Now, I am not a moderator and I have no authority, so consider this a friendly warning before the moderators do get on your case about this. I can see ...

Ahoy! Welcome to YWS! My name is Saint. :) Augh, why did Nate ever put that preserve stuff on here? It's annoying. But that's just personal opinion, don't mind the ...

Gaah, sorry it took me so long to get this to you. My MS Word went haywire, then I was in California for a week... >.< Anyway, check your e-mail! ...

Are husbands allowed in the room? I think so, but they have to put on the gown thingy and a facemask and the hat. And if it's an emergency and ...

Ahoy there! Welcome to YWS! I'm Saint. :D Well, I'd love to give you a proper critique on this, but I can't! It's a rule here on YWS that each ...

Hey there! Nice to see you poking around the site a bit. :D Well, I would love to help you out with this, but you don't have enough critiques under ...

...I think I got owned. :P Haha, nice job! I like this. I honestly think it's better than my entry. Well done. -St. Razorblade The Official YWS Pirate :pirate3:

The massive crowd roared deeply, a titanic, subterranean monster, marching around the bonfire which casted deep, rutted shadows across the university square. Woohoo, that took a couple reads. I think ...

Hehe, I remember this from English class. ;) Just sent my critique (finally)! Check your e-mail. -St. Razorblade The Official YWS Pirate :pirate3:

*snort/cackle* Lol! Pure brilliance, mate, pure brilliance. You may slurp it if you wish, Or just inhale it, like a fish. Best couplet. Easy. Soup is very wonderful indeed. -St. ...

Ahoy there! Welcome to YWS. My name is Razorblade. :D Before I can critique this properly, there's a few things I need to bring to your attention. First, please space ...

Ahoy there! Don't think I've met you before. My name is Razorblade, and I shall be your critic for today. ;) Ooh, I like your intro. Although, I think you ...

Hello there! As for positives, you have some good imagery and some textured characters. They're beginning to feel pretty realistic. One major problem I've noticed is your tendency to have ...

Ahoy there! I see you're fairly new to YWS. Welcome! I'm Razorblade. Anyway... Nel hit the dog, and screeched on the brakes; the rear of her car fishtailing, leaving scorch ...

Well, I haven't seen the movie you're talking about, but I can at least give a critique a go. :D They tried to make their way through the crowd, and ...