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Hello there! I haven't seen you around YWS before. My name is Saint and I shall be your critiquer today. ^_^ I've only scanned this, because after reading just your ...

Ahoy Vampirewolf! I haven't seen you around YWS before, but it looks like you've been here a while. So hello! I'm Saint and I shall be your critiquer today. :D ...

Boing! Part two. ^_^ made three days of nothing but the car for a five year old and a one year old. Their ages should be hyphenated, like "five-year-old" and ...

*waves* Hello again, Yoda my love! :D I stood, taking one last glance to the house, “Well, I guess this is goodbye”. That period better be inside the quotation marks. ...

*bounces in* As per your request, Yoda my dear! “Iraq,” this time a quick response; no more lingering. I think if you changed the comma to a period and capitalised ...

As you... um, commanded, sir. =P He picked himself up out of the mud frantically wiping away the dirt and grime from his Shozoku, cursing under his breath Feels to ...

*wiggles* Meep. I have no life. xD He looked like a Joe Smoe Joe Schmoe, perhaps? ;) ...A spoon? *reads on* “This,” John said, hoping the judge’s eyes would wonder ...

*invades* Muahahaha. I vacuum as a way to keep myself busy. I think that if I clean the house enough, then maybe it will stop. Instead, I can’t stop cleaning. ...

Hello there! I haven't seen you around YWS before. My name is Saint and I shall be your critiquer today. :D The taxi pulled up outside the terraced Ealing house ...

Erm... is there a point to this? A lot of the thoughts here are kind of disjointed. You talk about one thing, introducing some sort of archetype or symbol, and ...

Hello again Scribe! *waves* Is it slightly fangirl-ish of me that I see your username next to a thread title and I go "OMG yaaay?" xD Moving on... Another interesting ...

Ahoy Jasmine! *waves* You asked, I'm delivering! =D I have been called many things by many different sources, wicked, jealous, cruel, vain. A hyphen or semicolon would be lovely after ...

Best. Opening line. Ever. xD In fact, best entire story ever. *insane laughter* Random question that popped into my head while I was reading this: do penguins have feathers?Oh, and ...

*evil cackle* Review number... I can't be bothered to count! Be proud that I have included you in my conquest of the Instructor's critique contest. ^^ My sweaty hand started ...

Ahoy Proky! How are you doing this fine [insert time of day here]? :D They give it to me reverently; I am feared, respected; but I am also loved. The ...