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Re: Perspective- Chapter 1
This is really Good! Ok, so, I'm only 12, so I'm proberly bad at this but... Ok, so, I ahve noticed a few spelling mistakes. I won't really tell you, ...
Jun 3, 2012 -
Re: As a Cloud
Well Done! This has been presented clearly, and I love that. You can also kind of tell what's going on. It's also very descriptive, which makes it more intruging. This ...
May 31, 2012 -
Re: Get up
This is really good! It's very descriptive, and that's a good thing. It's thought out, and of course, set out clearly, which is what most readers want. I can think ...
May 31, 2012 -
Re: Cold Tea
This is amazing! You have put so much detail into this, and it's describing a story about A boy, and it's JUST REALLY Good! I'm actually struggling to write a ...
May 31, 2012 -
Re: Rest In Peace
This is well written. Mostly because it's very descriptive, and this is what most poems are like, but you've made this one special. But, I don't really get this. If ...
May 31, 2012 -
Re: Childhood Sweetheart - Chapter 2
The charcacters are well set out, you can spot there personalitlies. You've done well, and this is very clear, so you can tell whats going on. Sorry if I'm bad ...
May 31, 2012 -
Re: Childhood Sweetheart - Chapter 2
Amazing, nice work.
May 31, 2012 -
Re: We Are Born To Die
This is amazing. It's in great detail, which always matters. The theme of this story is dragging me in, and if you continue to write like this, you'll becaome a ...
May 19, 2012 -
Re: Pieces of Time
This is brilliant! The description of everything is crystal Clear, and you can create an image in your head of what the scenery and the what the people look like ...
May 14, 2012 -
Re: Forgiveness
This is amazing! How old are you, this is like grown up stuff! Come on, write more...!
May 7, 2012