TaylaChase

Hey Dakota :) Sorry, you were probably hoping for a good review, but I just wanted to say I think your story is awesome :D There's not much I can ...

Overall this is pretty good, but there were a few things I wanted to mention. Sithe crouched next to Verlinae, waves of musket fire and spells flew by them. I ...

Wow, great poem ^^ I really liked it! I don't know much about poems, so I can't really give you a review (Sorry) but I just wanted to say I ...

I really don't know much about poetry, but I liked it, I think you did a pretty good job conveying emotions through your writing. Again, I don't know much about ...

Wow, this is really good. I don't really have much to say that could help, but I just wanted to say I liked it. I'm not really into vampires, but ...

Wow, this is really good. I don't have much to say that Rachel hasn't already covered, but I figured I'd give you my opinion. There were a few grammar errors, ...

Well, I really haven't done this in a while so I apologize if my review totally sucks. Anyway, I really liked your piece of work, although I do somewhat agree ...

Hi, This is great! I really think you should continue on this story. I nodded, I knew that I always needed to cherish the time I had with him. I ...

Hi Dakota! Once again you've written another great piece! gazed at the crumbling buildings, the trash littering the streets, the ramshackle little huts the poorest of families had attempted to ...

Hi, I would suggest breaking this up into parts. It's quite long and lots of time people don't want to read something this long, or don't have the time. You'll ...

Hi Reida, I would suggest breaking this up into parts. It's quite long and some people don't like to read such long pieces, or don't have the time. You'll be ...

Hi, This was really good. I liked it! I like wolves quite a bit, and I'm writing a story about them, too. First of all, your beginning paragraph was good, ...

Hi Dakota, This was really good, it runs along smoothly and keeps the reader well captivated. I really enjoyed it! Wooden carts rattled noisily along the hard packed dirt road, ...

Hi, I would suggest maybe breaking this up a little and you might get more reviews. People don't always like to review long pieces or sometimes they don't have time. ...

This is quite interesting. It explains writers block well and isn't just a dry, boring essay as some are. I definitely have had WB before (although at the time I ...