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  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Illusions

    Hey Kat! Another great piece of poetry! This piece sounded a little choppy to me, might have been cause of all the commas, but it didn't seem to flow as ...

    Jun 27, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Believe

    Wow. Let me just say wow. I really liked this piece, it has so much emotion to it, it just explodes with emotion. I love it! I just don't have ...

    Jun 26, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Aftermath

    So, here I am again, and there you are again, with another awesome poem! They just keep getting better and better! How do you come up with such awesome poems?! ...

    Jun 26, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Broken mistake

    Hey Kat! Yet again, another amazing piece! My reviews are all probably starting to sound the same to you now. Welp, sorry about that, but here I go again. Again, ...

    Jun 26, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Lost (on the road of life)

    Okay, so I really liked this piece, as I like mostly all of your pieces. Anyway, my reviews on poems suck, but I'll give it a try. I really liked ...

    Jun 26, 2011
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Charlie

    Wow, I really like this. It's very interesting the way that it was written, but you can really get into the story and feel what the characters are feeling. There ...

    Jun 26, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: The Elf Child: Part 1 of Chapter 1

    Okay, first off, this would be a lot easier to read if you divided it into more paragraphs. Try dividing the big blocks of writing into smaller ones to make ...

    Jun 26, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Cold...

    Hey Kat, I don't have much time right now so I'll just give a quick (lame) review. First of all I really liked it. It was a little confusing (what ...

    Jun 25, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: (Wish it Was a) Fairytale

    So, overall I think this was decent, but you should try to portray more emotion. I like the 'theme' of it, but it could still use some work. Also, some ...

    Jun 22, 2011
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Virtuoso

    First of all, your beginning sentence could use some work. It doesn't really intrigue the reader and make them want to read more. Your beginning sentence should capture the readers ...

    Jun 21, 2011
  • Short Story » General, General Re: The new girl

    Hi, this is pretty interesting, you have a unusual type of writing style. I'm not really familiar with reviewing pieces written like this, but I'll do my best. I like ...

    Jun 21, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Never

    Well, I'm not really good at reviewing poetry, but I'm trying to get better. Anyway, I really liked your piece, it flowed nicely, and nothing seemed to be too forced ...

    Jun 21, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Too Far Gone

    Wow, I just wanted to say this was amazing (As was your last piece, Pretty Little Lucifer)! I really, really like your writing style, and I just want to say ...

    Jun 21, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Cursed

    Well, I really don't know much at all about poetry, but I thought this was awesome!! I really liked the lines, This mask I hide behind, has started breaking. Anyway, ...

    Jun 21, 2011
  • Short Story » General, General Re: The Battle Within*Revised*

    First off, I want to say I thought your story was awesome :D I really don't have much else to say, but there were a few things I want to ...

    Jun 20, 2011


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