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Re: Illusions
Hey Kat! Another great piece of poetry! This piece sounded a little choppy to me, might have been cause of all the commas, but it didn't seem to flow as ...
Jun 27, 2011 -
Re: Believe
Wow. Let me just say wow. I really liked this piece, it has so much emotion to it, it just explodes with emotion. I love it! I just don't have ...
Jun 26, 2011 -
Re: Aftermath
So, here I am again, and there you are again, with another awesome poem! They just keep getting better and better! How do you come up with such awesome poems?! ...
Jun 26, 2011 -
Re: Broken mistake
Hey Kat! Yet again, another amazing piece! My reviews are all probably starting to sound the same to you now. Welp, sorry about that, but here I go again. Again, ...
Jun 26, 2011 -
Re: Lost (on the road of life)
Okay, so I really liked this piece, as I like mostly all of your pieces. Anyway, my reviews on poems suck, but I'll give it a try. I really liked ...
Jun 26, 2011 -
Re: Charlie
Wow, I really like this. It's very interesting the way that it was written, but you can really get into the story and feel what the characters are feeling. There ...
Jun 26, 2011 -
Re: The Elf Child: Part 1 of Chapter 1
Okay, first off, this would be a lot easier to read if you divided it into more paragraphs. Try dividing the big blocks of writing into smaller ones to make ...
Jun 26, 2011 -
Re: Cold...
Hey Kat, I don't have much time right now so I'll just give a quick (lame) review. First of all I really liked it. It was a little confusing (what ...
Jun 25, 2011 -
Re: (Wish it Was a) Fairytale
So, overall I think this was decent, but you should try to portray more emotion. I like the 'theme' of it, but it could still use some work. Also, some ...
Jun 22, 2011 -
Re: Virtuoso
First of all, your beginning sentence could use some work. It doesn't really intrigue the reader and make them want to read more. Your beginning sentence should capture the readers ...
Jun 21, 2011 -
Re: The new girl
Hi, this is pretty interesting, you have a unusual type of writing style. I'm not really familiar with reviewing pieces written like this, but I'll do my best. I like ...
Jun 21, 2011 -
Re: Never
Well, I'm not really good at reviewing poetry, but I'm trying to get better. Anyway, I really liked your piece, it flowed nicely, and nothing seemed to be too forced ...
Jun 21, 2011 -
Re: Too Far Gone
Wow, I just wanted to say this was amazing (As was your last piece, Pretty Little Lucifer)! I really, really like your writing style, and I just want to say ...
Jun 21, 2011 -
Re: Cursed
Well, I really don't know much at all about poetry, but I thought this was awesome!! I really liked the lines, This mask I hide behind, has started breaking. Anyway, ...
Jun 21, 2011 -
Re: The Battle Within*Revised*
First off, I want to say I thought your story was awesome :D I really don't have much else to say, but there were a few things I want to ...
Jun 20, 2011
