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Thanks very much for the review.

Thanks for the review.

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You're welcome.

Well, in this part, I'm only trying to describe how the MC feels while he snoops the notebook of Nidhi. So, I guess there's no real room for dialogue. Thanks ...

Thank you for the review. Will tag you for sure.

Excellent review. I really really appreciate it. Will look into your advises. Thanks a lot.

I didn't see that coming, honestly! Anyway, that's what people here in YWC should do more often: give honest reviews, even if they sound a bit harsh. Thanks very much ...

It did help, Rana. Thanks.

There's nothing about patriarchal or matriarchal society here. It's just a friendly tease. Thanks for the review.

Um, I tried to mean the ears were kinda heating up, and so they turned red. Do you think I should change the sentence here?

I need you to do me a favor, Asith. Can you take another look at this piece and tell me if it's too unclear, especially what the narrator is lying ...

Actually, I did need the comparison. Thanks a lot, bro.

Thanks very much. You definitely were being honest. You see I'm writing this for a flash fiction fiction contest, with a word limit of 500! So naturally I had to ...

Thanks for the review.