Tatra

This is a very interesting beginning for what could be an interesting story. Even in its rough state, it brings up a lot of questions for the reader, making them ...

Another great chapter, adding more mystery even as you explain some things. I love how their first meeting was so simple, so disarming. And I love how your character continues ...

Finally reviewing this; my semester is over and I have recovered. I've also accepted the 100 reviews in 15 days challenge from Nate, which means I'll have to review all ...

Great chapter, again! I loved how you built up your past some more, giving us a deeper look at what's going on in the present. How, everything that happened in ...

Another great chapter, I love the indication that there's still more story before she gets in trouble with her family and then more story to happen in the present. And, ...

Another great chapter, filled with great action. I agree with an earlier reviewer, this one was paced a bit better. And the characters are awesome in this. Sera whimpered in ...

Yes, so I said that I would be off to read the next By Sun, By Moon, but I had to stop of here first. Really, it's just so that ...

Another great chapter. We finally get to see what got her into trouble, but the best part is that there's still more to learn. We know what got her into ...

Sorry I haven't been reviewing your new stuff lately. I wasn't reviewing anything for a while, but I'll be reviewing them now. :D I liked this chapter, how you've given ...

I really like this story. The title drew me in, though that's partly because I watch Stargate Atlantis, but the story grabbed me and dragged me through the story. I ...

Been some time since I've seen you. I never did comment on chapter five, but I couldn't find anything wrong with it. I still loved it though, just as I ...

This is a great poem, I do like how it goes from a child-like feel to the more threatening tone. I liked the imagery to it, and how the chalk ...

Sorry I took so long to review this, I went through a brief break in reviewing. But, I'm here to review. I think you have a good start, but I ...

I love your poem. I love the words used, and the imagery, beautiful. I only have two suggestion, the bold words. I think the first bold word would do better ...

Sorry this took so long, I've been a bit sick. I started this review, and then my head clogged up and I couldn't think enough to write out a good ...