Tarshni

I respect the criticism, but clearly you have absolutely no idea what these words mean or even what it is like to make love, not have 'sex'. I suggest you ...

Really sweet piece, Love the carried out metaphore. It really is beautifully written!

sorry about that, I do know all that you are telling me, I actually had it short for sumwhere else that i posted it, completly forgot to change it. Thanks!!

Really great poem... the words and imagery used was amazing. I think it can relate to a lot of people who often feel different and misplaced. extremely well written.