Tara

Snoink, you never fail to amuse me :lol:

The London Bridge line was actually one of my favorites. I noticed you didn't capitalize anything in this poem, such as "I" or "London".

Definitely LOTR. I was a huge fan of Tolkien's when I was a really lil girl, and I don't really like Rowling's writing style, although I do think she has ...

:lol: that was easy

Oh, ok, I get it. I get the firefly thing too. This is good, Brad...very good...wow

Emma, are you going to finish his or leave us hangin? Come on, more! pleaaaase?

Thanx everyone, I really appreciate your critiques, especially Mesh. I couldn't ask for better editors!

Brad, you're brilliant!!

That was amazing Faith. Canabalistic pigeons, so tru, so true.

I loved the last stanza! That was beautilfull. I'm not going to even try to critique that

We did this whole section on Shakespeare (The frothy drink, lol, right Crysi?) my freshmen year. This one guy in our class kept translating it to...very simple terms, lol.

Yeah, this is just the beggining...the very beggining in the first chapter.

lol, thanx Hunt :wink:

~*goes off to find Mesh's other stuff*~

Thanx for all your comments, guys :) This isn't really a poem, that's why it has no real structure. I didn't know ehere else to post it. It's just a ...