TamaraGoesRawr

I like the mental images the poem created and how you worded it, though maybe try making it a bit longer.

I love how this got me thinking about questions I never would have thought about. The big words make it sound very professional. Honestly I could read this five times ...

I really liked this. I liked all the details and the last line really gave it some tension. You might want to try and make it a bit shorter though, ...

I understand how you feel in this poem, but I think you need to make it longer. I like the questions; they make a person think.

This is so pretty, I can really relate too it. I liked the way you worded things because it gave the poem a specific mood.