TamaraGoesRawr

This is kind of confusing. How are you feeling his/her tears? And you had a small problem with capatalization. Also, try saying "Now you're gone" instead of "you're gone now" ...

I liked this. But I think you need to space the sentances a bit more, to make it easier to read. I liked how the feelings were back and forth; ...

I love it, honestly. It's really relatable and the feeling is clearly shown. I can't find any punctuation or anything that's wrong with this poem. I'd like to hear more ...

I like the details in this. It reminds me of a song by Escape The Fate ,actually. I can't really find anything wrong with this poem. I'd like to hear ...

This was really good, I liked the imaginary feel to it. As far as I'm concerned, you should submit this to a contest or something. I didn't find anything wrong ...

The imagination in this poem is amazing and very creative. There isn't much you can fix, I don't think. But on some lines I think you need to add maybe ...

Overall I liked it, but I have a suggestion for one line. The line where you say " I wouldn't go" try replacing it with something like "I'd never go", ...