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Re: Tallon chapter 2
thanks! my knowlodge comes from research and watching Constantine and reading hellblazer comics. the demons are slightly adapted versions of my imagination.
Jun 9, 2015 -
Re: One Man for Himself - Chapter 1: The Flight
You should try to break up the paragraphs more, it can stress readers eyes if their so long. Also, you don't need to say rufus so much- A lone warrior ...
Jun 8, 2015 -
Re: Across the Void (Part 1:)
so “This far from civilisation, should there be any light?” it should be civilization.Svartalon hurriedly pushed the welling tears from his face and rushed towards the notes sprawled across his ...
Jun 4, 2015 -
Re: Robin Hood - Chapter Two
Legolus is bae!! ;)
Jun 4, 2015 -
Re: Robin Hood - Chapter Two
Is captain kilian hook? maybe you should put what Colm is thinking in italics.“It’s okay boy, you will be needed to run very soon if I play my cards right.” ...
Jun 3, 2015 -
Re: Dream-Hunters - Chapter Two
Love the cliffhanger! but when you say she said/he said, replace the period with a comma.“That’s right, John.” Sophie walked forward ominously. “You’ve got some explaining to do.” “That
Jun 2, 2015 -
Re: Dream-Hunters - Chapter Two
Love the cliffhanger! but when you say she said/he said, replace the period with a comma.“That’s right, John.” Sophie walked forward ominously. “You’ve got some explaining to do.” “That
Jun 2, 2015 -
Re: Dream-Hunters - Chapter One
That's really good!
Jun 2, 2015