Talking_Pinata

Well written article and some nice proof I must say. ---- I'd just like to add my opinion in as well: I find a balance, I try to look good ...

Ah! please space the paragraphs! Sorry. It just annoys me. I will return to review when that has happened. Thankyou!

Some of it confused me, but overall the descriptions were very nice. Colorful language too, you didn't repeat words! Thankyou for that! Also, I agree that you rock for using ...

Incredibly smooth writing, not a cliche subject, everything here is wonderful! I envy your talent at writing narrative poetry. I really, really do. GOLD STAR FOR YOU!

I have officially discovered the lyrics forum! This is wonderful! Very nice song! Kudos to a job well done!

THis is really nice. I wish it wasn't your only poem. The emotion and indirectness is nice and the slight confusion it provides keeps my attention wonderfully. Kudos to you.

This is a really nice poem, but I do believe you could expand upon it and make it even better. What I saw here was very creative and awesome though.

Yes. It is the future of the world. -____- Great poem, I loved it.

Lovely piece, really. I had a few really nice "Aw" moments here and there. I especially love the way they describe things to one another. Not simply, but with a ...

Look who found you! That's right, the kid from deviantart! Once again, nothing I can see wrong here! And the spacing is nice too! -_^

I agree. This poem is rather funny and you smile. But then, as you read on you realize just how hard it is on the person and how much they ...

Thankyou everyone! I like the spacing (sorry) so I'm keeping it, but I appreciate the compliments!

Wow. I get the joke. Wow. And then it turns out to be they're working on the car. Wow.

The author's note is now up! Don't forget to read!

Thankyou for the compliment and edits! They helped so much! I'll be editing it soon!