Talking_Pinata

Thankyou again! I will look at this until I figure out how to leave everyone with something of substance! Thankyou for all other reviews I will take everything into consideration ...

Ah! Thankyou for the praise! *bows to you* Thankyou thankyou THANKYOU! Ah. But the ignorant adults don't have angels! Cabbage knew he had to leave, for the children needed him ...

Thankyou that is a great tip for me! I'll use it to my advantage and look back over it!

Thankyou everyone. One thing I'd like to clear up. This whole thing was supposed to be...*thinks for word* clearly hazy. I know. Contradictory, but I describe everything and the readers ...

Thankyou everyone for your reviews!

Thankyou for all the reviews everyone!

Thankyou! I will definitely consider your review helpful! Thakyou for the nitpicks I need to change!

Thankyou for the comments and opinions! I'll take everything into consideration! *much love to my readers*

I don't see any gramatical errors... Oh! I'm very interested! Questions arise from just reading this! I'll be waiting only slightly patiently for more!

Wow. I read the first sentence...and my attention was caught. Is there a prologue to this or do I start here? That is really my only question. If you could ...

Wow. Amazing so far. No complaints here as of right now. I really don't see anything that doesn't make this a fascinating read. I am thoroughly caught up and waiting ...

Found you. You know I already love it.

Wow. O_O I spelled WARM wrong *headdesk* I am such a stupid child.

Thankyou!

GAH! Just a disclaimer to readers. I did indent the paragraphs, the computer then disobeyed me and un-indented them.