Talking_Pinata

I still need reviews, I apologize for the single bump. :)

Thank you for the reviews already! I've edited it some, although I'm still thinking on how I want to say the first sentence, if I'm going to change it. Thank ...

AHHH! Thank you! I appreciate the completment so much!

I'm sorry. I couldn't rewrite this as poetry, for I'm not a very good poet. ;)

It's a metaphor. It's not SUPPOSED to make complete sense. And its not that the girl is a doll. It's that the doll is a girl. Its a person. Metaphorically ...

Thank you! These last two compliments make me feel great about this story! They mean a lot to me!

Thank you for the reviews! I've made edits that I hope are sufficient!

Thankyou for the review, and I agree, I hit the cliche point of insanity there. O_O. You're also right that I should rewrite, rewrite and rewrite. I think your review ...

Wow. That was simply...amazing. I mean, you're so right. Dirt and the has a story and...whoah. *bows to you*

I have EDITED THIS PIECE! 7/29/08 Please review and re-review! THANK YOU!

Thank you for the complements/suggestions everyone! I agree totally with the "rushed" factor and I'll be adding some more in there when I think of more. @_@ Thank you SO ...

Thank you for the review. Everything you've said about covers what I thought the problems with it were. I'll try and edit it soon. :)

Ah yes. And I wasn't sure if I was delusional or not, but it turns out I was right when I thought that I was hearing the word "she" a ...

That's HARDLY I review Xena. We're talking about the writing piece, NOT the situation. And if you noticed, the author said that her friend was better now.

I understand what you mean when you say it could have been better as a poem. Although I agree, I just couldn't seem to put it into verse form. So ...