Talking_Pinata

I disagree. I like the anonymous person being ... well... anonymous. This is a short piece, but I like it a lot none the less. Drawing it out, though, might ...

Trees can whistle, I assure you. It adds the perfect sound of the wind through the trees in my head, PLEASE DEAR LORD DON'T CHANGE THAT. :| The commas you ...

I agree with needing more description. Not only is this a short piece (which I understand you were just wanting to know whether or not to continue, and I assure ...

I really like this. Creepy, and I agree with people, the white room added so much. While people says this doesn't have an ending, it does. It gives us a ...

As others have said, very creative. I'm glad you PMed me to get me here. :) Exhilarating is the word for it, isn't it? Yes, it is. Good work and ...

Comments by me will be in bold Prologue For weeks, I have had this in my head. The only problem was that every time I sat down to write, I ...

Don't make me do it. XD Okay here goes: "I think this story would belong better in scifi" :3 Told you. Anywho. I'm not one of your masterminds who do ...

Wow. This is nice. I've never really thought about the personification of a bed. The format and grammar is perfect, in my eyes, so let's talk a tiny bit about ...

Haha. I just have to. I just HAVE to point out that Einstein wasn't a genius in english AT ALL. EVER. XD I found that comment hilarious. Sorry if I ...

I strongly disagree with the quote you decided to use to defend your near copying of Stephanie Meyer's idea. Great writers create, they don't steal, they make up their own ...

Well you've just caught my attention more than any story around here. A baby? What's so bad about that?! Well, I'd be scared about the pain, but aren't they married? ...

I love these characters. And you manage to make the cliche cat-boy a little more life like and interesting! That can be a difficult task. One thing, could you describe ...

I agree that it is ironic to post something that you think isn't good. On the other hand, I think this was a fairly good piece! Especially for an eleven ...

Wow. Just. Wow. That was the best story I've ever read about an inanimate object EVER. Seriously. Major, MAJOR kudos to you on an amazing story. Amazing amazing story. That ...

I never realized just how much that makes sense. I never knew why they felt happier after drinking. I myself have never had a drink in my life, so I ...