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  • Poetry » Humor, Other Re: Pointless.

    That any better?

    Jan 22, 2014
  • Poetry » Humor, Other Re: Pointless.

    I am surprised and baffled that you took time to Google it for such a pointless poem! I'll be sure to make changes later.

    Jan 22, 2014
  • Poetry » Humor, Other Re: Pointless.

    The lack of comma there is a clever poetical device I am using, to portray sadness in the poem (hehehe no it's not) I literally wrote this in under 60 ...

    Jan 22, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, Other Re: Dancing Free.

    That ok?

    Jan 20, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, Other Re: Dancing Free.

    Any better?

    Jan 20, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, Other Re: Dancing Free.

    Thank you! :-)

    Jan 20, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, Other Re: Dancing Free.

    Thanks! I will edit as soon as possible. :-)

    Jan 20, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, Other Re: Dancing Free.

    In explanation of the first line of the third verse, they were the beats for the step I was doing. Thanks, I will make punctuation changes shortly, but I do ...

    Jan 19, 2014
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Other Re: Abstract Seasoning

    No real definition, but generally between each verse, and at the end, as a rule of thumb. :-)

    Jan 19, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Health Re: I close my eyes, but whirlpools dance on the rim of my brain

    I was close.... :-)

    Jan 17, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Horror Re: Seven signs of insanity

    Your welcome! :-)

    Jan 17, 2014
  • Poetry » Other, Other Re: Wonderdreams

    Thanks! Your the second person to say my writing style is Dickensian. :-) Don't forget to like!

    Jan 16, 2014
  • Poetry » Other, Other Re: Wonderdreams

    High prase indeed! :-) Don't forget to like! :-)

    Jan 16, 2014
  • Poetry » Other, Other Re: Wonderdreams

    High prase indeed! :-) Don't forget to like! :-)

    Jan 16, 2014
  • Poetry » Other, Other Re: Wonderdreams

    Thanks! :-) don't forget to like!

    Jan 16, 2014


Isn't it funny how day by day nothing changes but when you look back, everything's different?
— C.S. Lewis