TakeThatYouFiend

Metaphorical directions need not obay gravity.

Thanks! I may make that into a seperate poem... :-)

Oops. :-)

That would break the rhythm, which is what makes it a hayaku. You have missed out a third thing-message. Thanks for the review!

There are no directions in space.

Thanks! My punctuation is being bounced backwards and forwards like a galactic yoyo!

Thanks! :-)

Thanks! :-)

Thanks! :-)

Yes, however I know God to exist. When you have spoken to someone, and felt his presence throughout life, it is fair to say you know they exist. In my ...

Thanks, and particularly for reading the previous reviews!

I don't go outside, just have a huge window!

Go red team. Thanks, I included the "the" to make it scan and mirror "a belief". What I am trying to say is I do not think God is real, ...

Thanks! I am not sure, but I think I need the full stop to make it a proper hayaku. I just thought I would give one a shot, usually I ...

There you go! One (two) extra commas!