TabbyGirl

I stand by the grave of Tina McKlur. The type of girl who was just her. She was openly gay So T he others decided she would pay They were ...

Alrighty, I suspect the other reviewers got all the nitpicks, so I will just give you my overall impression... It seemed you jumped around... like, you were talking about Asytia ...

Yeah, it was cute, and funny... and, well, I sort of want to nitpick it and tell you which lines were unnecessary, and tell you something... I don't know, meaningful, ...

Ah... I figured this is where you were heading when I read This totally had to be written, I swear. But, whatever... I, myself, have gone here before. I can't ...

Hmmm.... very intruiging... I think Kafka got all the little nitpicks, so I'll just tell you what I think... 1- I'd like it if you described the girl who comes ...

Hey Ally! So, I'm not going to leave a really long review, sorry... but I just thought I'd tell you what I think, and, you know, contribute to the Review ...

Yo, okay, so I was going to do nitpicks, but... er, the truth is that you're grammar was... not great. I'll do all the nitpicks later, if you like, just ...

Hm... another story about...... this . Don't get me wrong, please. I'm not saying this is unoriginal, but I have recently read/written something along these lines... (I know this is ...

Dear, I understand... sort of... look, when it comes down to it you can't just blow grammar off. It's as simple as that. When people give harsh reviews, it can ...

Okay, well, hmm... I think this is something that has to be done right. It's interesting, but... I don't like how it was made of several little tiny chapters... it ...

Well... I guess I should have headed your warning... the opening part did... disturb me... I've never read something so graphic :O hehe... I feel naughty XD But anywho... He ...

Hello! Here for just a quick review... Um, I don't have any critisisms really... this is really sad... morbid, even. Which is fine. That's surly what you were going for. ...

Tinkem! Thanks for the follow, by the way. As I’m the first to review I’ll go ahead and nitpick… No matter the situation will be by my side, you say ...

I liked this idea... a witch who was home schooled until she was fifteen... sent to school to spy on Harry Potter... However, I don't know how technically correct it ...

I really liked this, seriously, it was so... different... It was new, it was romantic but it wasn't... great job. However, I can't say I see eye to eye with ...