TYLENOL

This is so messed up that it works. First of all, I must say that a lot of the points that you raise about yourself are relevant to most people. ...

This is very cool and your writing is very mature for your age;very well written even tough there are a few mistakes. I'm definitely getting a hunger games vibe which ...

This seems interesting, but you should put up more of a story next time. I like that your trying to create an environment for the reader to emerse himself in. ...

Nice ending and interesting premise but reading this was quite hard. It was just so mundane and devoid of any emotion. It felt longer than it was. Also, try to ...