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“After having Stayed in this position some short time we proceeded and by the time we were Clear of the Wood all the fireing and the Indians and Roialists were ...

I agree with Aedomir. This wasn't very good at all. It was meant as an April Fool's joke, no? Well... I thought it wasn't very funny at all. In fact... ...

Hey, there! I owe you a critique! Okay, I'm going to be honest here. I really didn't like this poem. It just didn't work. It probably didn't work for you, ...

:shock: Uh... Wow? Dude, that was amazing! I was hooked to my seat the entire ride! Man, that was sooo cool! Oh.. wow. Gosh, that was so awesome. Okay, now ...

Hey! That was really awesome! I really liked it! I've read New Moon and thought it was the best out of the three. This song really hits the spot that ...

:) Hahah. He's allergic to my favorite food ever! Mushrooms are fantastic, dude. Anyway, I thought this was waaaaayyyy too tell-y. Get what I'm saying? It's all really well done, ...

How come you always get the best reviews ever? Ugh. No one ever critiques me. Anyway, best part so far! I am in love with this story! It rocks my ...

Haha! I think this is the best part of the whole journal! I finished off the night with a thriller movie and large bowl of ice cream, ‘cause frankly, I ...

Hey, Jared! I haven't been on here for so long... but you brought this to school a while back and so I thought I'd comment on it. You already know ...

Wow. This was really different. Unlike anything I've ever read on this site - or in the world. Cool! I don't really understand the actual meaning of them poem. It's ...

Hey! I owe you a critique! I thought that it was pretty good - but echoing the others - I couldn't understand what it was you were trying to make ...

Why post it if it has no meaning? I think we post things on here to get critques so we can help you become a better author. If you're not ...

Hey! I owe you a critique, so here I am! Lifting the quill he stared at the parchment sighing with all out hopelessness. Holding his buckets of tears that threatened ...

You have a lot of critiques, so sorry if I repeat anything! This was a wonderful poem. I really enjoyed it. It was just... so brilliantly crafted! It wasn’t the ...

Hey! I owe you a critique! At 7 o’clock, he was standing at the lift, waiting for it to reach floor 17. Always write out the numbers. (seven o'clock) (floor ...