SynonymousTom

I'm sorry! I thought I left a like :) And I'm glad I picked up on the dystopian, setting. I'm super excited to see where you run with it! And ...

Anytime :D

Better!

I love what you did! I personally think it flows much better :)

I'm glad I picked up on all of that! I love seeing the inner workings of things. And I wouldn't worry too much about my critiques! I always make them ...

Thanks for the review! And no worries about the review's length, you wrote PLENTY for the length of my poem :)

Thank you! I'm actually hoping to work on and publish a second version where I add another stanza or two. I'll take your advise and work on that final line. ...

Thank you for the feedback!