Swottielottie

Thank you so much, that's very useful feedback! I look forward to checking out your work. :)

Sorry to double post, but I was just rereading this, and I think it's not bad. I may consider rewriting it with my new plot and characters. What do you ...

I will! It's my second favourite food!

. Perhaps next time you might like to think about that before you give in to SwottieLottie's amusing ideas, m'kay? ~bubbles XD I didn't really tell him to post this, ...

Gracias! Yeah, you're right, the rhythm is a bit off sometimes. But I did write this in about ten minutes, so I didn't really read through it XD I'll try ...

I did not, Thien, now everyone knows YOUR real name, but you already advertised that three times in your username. I don't mind being known as Charlotte. SO: :P

I did not! You did this of your own accord! LIAR! XD

Thanks XD But I hope someone figures out what it's about. (My Book!)

Yeah, I sucked at the whole humour thing. XD It's really just a song for people who know me very well/ or are me, so I wouldn't worry that you ...

Yeah! That's how we British spell it :) But thanks for critting!

P.S. NO CRITIQUE TOO HARSH FOR ME!!! Lol That's a good attitude to have. XD They're meant to be the same, you say? Hmm... I think I understand what you ...

Edited! If anyone else wants to read/review this.

Thanks for critting! I think I wrote this over a year ago, when I was young and immature (I still am!) It was for this homework, so I wasn't too ...

Thank you :) Shakespeare is truly great! Sweeney Todd was awesome! YAY! Someone who likes both those things and my work! XD

Oh! I'm sorry everyone! I just realised what story this is! This is my very old version of The Blue Crystal! Its is now called The cerulean Crystal and has ...