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Just a little tidbit, her name is pronounced; sar-mee-nuh ow-gue-lar.

I agree with the first nitpick here. how about, 'On her face was an expression of the utmost horror'? Just a suggestion. :)

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Just a little tidbit, her name is pronounced; sar-mee-nuh ow-gue-lar.

About the dream, I could change it to the default dream from the alternate start mod, (yes, my character was supported by many mods), or you could tell me what ...

It's Tabaxi, but that's okay. This was sort of a prologue. I'm working on the first chapter, but I haven't written anything yet. (I also created a cover for it ...

Well done.

Clever riddle. I thought it was air.

Thank you, I'll fix it.

Ohhhhh, I see. Good job, though.

Thank you, I'll fix it soon. :)

This really helped! Thanks!

Thank you, I appreciate it. It really helps. :)

Thank you, I appreciate it. It really helps. :)

Thank you, I appreciate it. It really helps. :)