Swiftfurthewarrior

I would like to add Pride comes before downfall, but I don't know where to place it. :(

That's a cool song. I'd like to hear it someday. :)

This is a wonderful piece. I can see absolutely nothing wrong with it. Keep writing! I want to read more. :) ~Swiftfur

Thanks, I agreed with the second suggestion too. :0

I have no idea where I got the inspiration. xD Thank you!

This is really good, jessie. I like the way it flows and the wording you used. You said this was a quick one? Wow. Anyway, no spelling, grammar, or punctuation ...

Than you. :)

I agree. :) Thank you for the review.

Thanks! It kind of has an incomplete feel about it...

You fixed it. :)

Hi there, Lenora! This is a wonderful piece of work you have written. There is only one tiny spelling mistake in the second stanza, line two; "taking" should be "talking". ...

It's brilliant. :)

It seem I have competition. Nah, you don't have to worry about me. Your poems blew me out of the water. :D

I know this was also inspired by Roses of May. :)

I know this one was inspired by the second to last verse in Roses of May. :)