Swavvy123

Thanks. I did use paragraphs but again the save and edit thingy erased them. I also corrected the mistakes but they didn't save. It's very frustrating when previewing. The del ...

Maybe you didn't feel anything. It doesn't quite mean everybody thinks the same as you. I didn't say I didnt care but your taking it too seriously. It's not like ...

um.. I wrote the poem with the line breaks hence the commas then full stops the preview thing messed it up without the line breaks. i also didnt write this ...

I felt like I could really connect with this poem. I dunno but somehow I saw myself in this poem. It's very beautiful, the way you were able to describe ...

thanks. i was bored and came up with this so that's why its quite short...

I guess I can comment my own piece. I'm African specifically Nigerian. This piece is quite personal to me because the main character and I share quite a it in ...

Thanks a lot. The main character and I are quite similar in some ways in our views about life so it's kinda a personal piece.

Thanks so much. I did correct the typos but I guess it didn't save.

I do really like your work though. Have a few observations. Firstly the tense you are writing in can be a bit confusing at times so it would be easier ...

Hi I really love the way this girl thinks, it's quite captivating though I do think you should have explained a bit more about why she feels this way. I ...