Swarnima

wow! The best words were.. "word-by-cruel word". When it started with a good looking guy the reader presumes a 'cindrella ending' but the ending of your poem is your hero! ...

yes I got your point :) .. It does sound better that way!... Thanks a lot for your honest and helpful review.... now you can count on me to ask ...

Thank you so much Kyla. Ill improve my punctuation... as for 'colour' I used it because I am used to British English... It truly helped... now ill know when to ...

Well, as jordin said, there isn't much to review..... because it is truly great. Every word told of the feelings you must have wanted to put through to the reader. ...

hey... it is a good story. It kept me interested till the end. I especially liked the part where he has his dinner. But I too felt thrown off by ...

Thank you. I'll remember all that and correct the spelling mistakes. :) Thank you again.

I have heard a lot about the living conditions in Kashmir. One article about problems of soldiers posted on the border inspired me to write this. I pray to God ...

Thank you.... I'll remember that capitalization thing. :)