SuzieCake

CHAPTER TWENTY Isaac answered the door with such swiftness that it caught me off guard. His smile was wide [s]in[/s] on his face, his voice clear. “Hello? Can I help—” ...

I enjoyed reading this chapter as much as I did the last two, but I feel like there is something left out... It's missing a lot. And it's short. Are ...

Hi! I'm SuzieCake and my review is in the attachment below. =)

The only thing I can say is this was good. I enjoyed hearing more about Jack, and so far I'm liking him a lot. =) I can't wait for chapter ...

I really just skimmed through this, so I didn't have time to look for errors, but this is good. I can't wait for the next chapter!

I ejoyed this, and I didn't see any errors. Please continue! I am anxious for the rest. :wink:

The only thing I could do now was to go forward and hopefully get back into Philip’s good graces. Why wasn't she in Philip's good graces anymore?

“Please, seek us out if you ever wanna talk,” This just doesn't sit well with me for some reason. But it's the only thing that I saw was wrong. =)

Sorry for posting twice, but I forgot some. :? I circled the town a few times until I pinpointed my prey—a male around the age of forty-five, single, no attachments ...

Prologues really aren't my specialty. I was actually just trying it out. So... I understand completely where you guys might not get the emotion from them or feeling as though ...

This seems to be the best I have read so far. I would love to read more about this. I was intrigued and I was a little disappointed when it ...