SushiSashimi333

Awesome! I was a little worried that I would have trouble with their relationship since I am an only myself, but I have a friend like a sister so I ...

Yeah, I will take into consideration your review once I decide to start this up again. At first I was just gonna drop this but some people really liked it ...

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?_? I'm a little confused. You commented on Devil Touch and say you're going to chapter one, but this is a completely different story. @_@

O_O I am so jelly right now!

XD I like Fiera's name I must say. It sounds like fire which is just like her personality! Very nicely done ^_^

Oh O_O well that sure is different from what I thought it meant XD I would clear that up a bit. It really is strange what your computer is doing ...

Okay, I'll try tomorrow, should I leave another review?

Oh yeah, you don't have to put all their thoughts. For some things that you want to keep secrets but reveal just a bit, you could go with body language ...

Thanks :D

Yeah, I guess what's going through the fighters heads and the sweat running down their face or whatever. The blood pumping etc. This is kinda like showing the effect adrenaline ...

Thank you so much for the review! I have to agree about Cerys. Personally I have a harder time writing as her because there aren't many people like her in ...

Yay! I'm glad you like it! If you like we can update you when chapter two is out?

O_O oh my! Then we shall definitely keep writing XD. The next chapter will be on my account, so I'll be sure to update you once that comes out and ...

It is ^_^ and then when you get off track it's even more fun because your creative juices were already on a roll. Then who knows where you'll end up ...