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yes, yes we did. whoooo...oooot... B)

I like this, the flow is good and gives it a sing song like feel. The "Soon" part felt a little out of place, nothing else seems to be the ...

Oh yeah, woops! About the bolded-ness, whenever I paste something in it all comes out bold, and for some reason I can unbold all of it except for the first ...

Yeah, I myself have no real idea where they are, I guess I should fix that. I just know that anything is possible there, anything at all really. I hope ...

sure, I will definitely remember to tell you once the next chapter is up, thanks!

Whenever I get a review I try to fix the story asap, so if some of the reviews don't make sense, well I fixed them :)

Yeah, for some reason whenever I copy and paste from google docs it becomes automatically bold. I tried taking it off bold but for some reason or another it didn't ...

Thank you, I sure hope more people will too.

Oh yeah, also forgot that I do understand you feeling of loneliness, knowing that no one cant truly and wholly understand you. Hurts a bit. But I guess that's what ...

Awesome, we shall try to learn more, maybe I should take more grammar classes. (might not help me, I'm a lost cause) I'll tell Noel to check this out, will ...

whew, thank you, I was so worried that people weren't going to like this one. I shall keep at it, hopefully the rest will be just as good. Hee hee!

Thank you! I hope you enjoy that one too. :)

we were deciding whether 1st person (noel) or whether the stories should stay completely dialogue explained (me).

i did? o well, stupid me hee hee. let's keep the next one a secret.

No no no no, I didn't want anything except for dialogue, no he thought part. And then the quotation marks are all wrong. And also the second part is "Sloth".