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  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Devil Touch - Chapter One

    Thanks for the review! I am so glad that you understand the importance of my prologue, that's actually a really big deal in this story, bigger than you think it ...

    Aug 23, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Devil Touch - Prologue

    Yeah, you actually hit the nail on the head with this review. At first it was just a teaser but then I found myself getting sucked into my own story. ...

    Aug 19, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Devil Touch - Chapter Three

    Oh yeah! Actually in the prologue it should say who Marya is, and as for Sanna he will be explained in the next chapter a bit and what their relationship ...

    Aug 17, 2013
  • Poetry » Romantic, Realistic Re: It's her.

    O gosh! Grif! You know me and how I don't like mushy gooey things like this, but this was definitely the exception! It made me want to hug someone.

    Aug 15, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Devil Touch - Chapter Three

    Yeah, actually if you read the prologue that should tell you who Marya is. Also the part about Marya puking and Sanna, that will all be explained in the next ...

    Aug 13, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Devil Touch - Chapter Three

    Thanks for the review! Now that you mention it that line really does need to be fixed. I'm glad you got the medieval vibe because that's kinda how I imagine ...

    Aug 13, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Devil Touch - Chapter Four

    Okay ^_^

    Aug 12, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Devil Touch - Chapter Four

    Sorry, this one wasn't out yet. I don't why but it showed up despite it still being a work it process. Sorry :/

    Aug 12, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Romantic Re: Empress Fallen - Chapter 1 - Part 1

    Oh, now I get it. That's a pretty cool idea, the part that confused me about it is that I normally picture towers to be like the Sear's/Willis Tower. Really ...

    Aug 9, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Devil Touch - Chapter Three

    Thanks! Thank goodness you told me about how you view Marya's thoughts, I never would have caught that on my own. I'm glad that you like this and hopefully this ...

    Aug 8, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Devil Touch - Chapter Three

    Thank you very much and welcome!

    Aug 8, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Devil Touch - Chapter Three

    Thanks! :D

    Aug 8, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Dramatic Re: What comes next? - Chapter 1.

    Glad I could help ^_^

    Aug 8, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Science Fiction Re: Fate - Chapter One

    Attitude? I was pretty much just barfing my thoughts then slapping a random plot on top to make it all pretty XD I guess it turned out okay though. Wish ...

    Aug 4, 2013
  • Article / Essay » Review, General Re: The Sword-Dancer Saga

    This actually sounds pretty good from what you told me here. I think I should check it out. I'm fourteen so I believe I pass your age restriction test XD

    Aug 3, 2013


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