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Kitly and Dusky: Glad you enjoyed it :).

Yeah - I didn't really put too much effort into getting the spellings and typos fixed. But meh, I'm still too lazy ;). Whee - part two! Aha – another ...

I voted 'interessting' ;). I'm curoius - are you posting up any more of this?

My IQ was only about 80 before I started. I feel really sorry for myself now. I did actually start to write advice. Then I gave up.

Tis all arei's fault - she confused me with her heathen language ;).

arei: Thank's for point them out :). I admit... I didn't actually spell check this piece. It must be litered with mistakes. mike: Glad you enjoyed this, but I'm afraid ...

*points to his above post :)*

I agree with you on both points. In fact, they're the reasons I want to rewrite this. But I have more interessting stories to write. So I'm gonna leave this ...

At the moment I have no further plans for it :).

:-s Is it really that convincing? This isn't real - just fiction and how I think vampires should be. So you don't need to alter your story in anyway ;). ...

Yes...

Kay Kay: His story is (I believe) 'The Chronicles of the Dhampir' and can be found in the Action/Adventure forum :). Loll: Thanks 8).

No worries, lots of people make that make that mistake :).

This is just a fiction piece ;).

That comment goes right over my head, but thanks anyway :D.