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TBR: I think this is a joke. Well, I hope it is anyway. The Metal Gear series has some really good characterisation - I may just have to put aside ...

Twilight: Yes well, um, I'd rather you send such messages via PM to Bob, as oposed to posting them in my story thread ;).

Tropicana and JigSaw - I have future chapters planned (which is why the whole Alex and homicidal bis driver thing wasn't explained - it will all be explained in the ...

I don't like colons - I very rarely use them (and also rarely notice them in other pieces of work, for that matter) ;). I only recently learnt how to ...

Kiashana: Ironically, this story is based off of a nightmare (well, actually, two nightmares) I had. The part you quoted was based off one of those nightmares. Bob: Aigh, Simon ...

I don't intend too :P. I didn't intent to write this either, and I'm not too sure why I did. Mainly, it's just the practice of writing poetry that I ...

Why do people like it? Personally, I think it's terrible. Anyway Snoink, I'll check out that artical :).

Okay, I've edited the story. It's mostly grammar errors really, though I put in some spelling ones too. If you spot any spelling and/or grammar mistakes, please post 'em :).

I've had over 50 LD's. In fact, I had one the other night ;).

I'm sorry you had to die though. Very tragic. But I'm sure you'll be pleased to know your funeral was a hit.

No real critque. I like the voice and feel the story. It flows wells. No obvious errors. Maybe someone else will have more to contriubute than me though ;).

Ah, thanks for the mistake. I'm going over this is a second, so I'll be sure to fix that. Reminds of your Darren Shan's writing? Well, seeing as he's a ...

I'm a a multi-thingyionaire, I can have it converted :).

It's about time your reign of terror came to an end. But hey, ask me nicely and I'll pay your bail ;).

I'm actually not supprised that you found the begining quite slow. I quite liked the very begining part, but couldn't figure out how to then connect it to the killing ...