Sureal

You don't have to take my advice if you don't want too: everything I said is my opinion, and this is your story. I - as a reader - found ...

If you have your parent's permission, than it's allowed (or summit like that).

Thanks to both of you for your replies :). I've updated the poem 8).

Yo 8). ‘In fact, I had practically all his bad habits and social defects. We’re so alike in that area it’s almost scary. The only difference is that I’m a ...

Don't get me wrong - I do intend to read the Inheritance series (I wouldn't dare judge a book properly without reading it). My last post is just based on ...

I have never read any of the Inheritance series. However, from grazing reviews, it does appear to be a rather poor series (largely due to a complete lack of origionality).

Thanks to everyone who critted (especially aeroman, who gave heaps of help :)). I'm currently reworking and editting this into the second draft :).

Oh, I got confused. Nevermind then.

Neither have I.

Read the first one. Hated it. Refused to read anymore.

I had a lucid dream last night ^_^. Anyways, loving the poem. Not much I can say (although I'd be the first to admit that I can't crit poetry ;)).

By the way, Sureal, this poem was dedicated to Ann Coulter, and she is the evil woman who wrote the books "Godless" and "How to Talk to a Liberal If ...

Just because it's a negative emotion doesn't make it a bad poem.

Thank's for the crit :). I agree with you on the description, and will try to improve that in the next revision 8).

Edited and revised it. Whaddayah think?