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Nitty-picks: in which the man assented, by raising all four of his eyebrows. Four eyebrows? ‘Put these on.’ Logan was suddenly aware of the man rushing around the house, thrusting ...

Hi there. =) It's a bit ... short. It's kindda hard to review it, because of this. I do have two comments though: 1) Beware of purple prose. Purple prose ...

Jiggity, I wouldn't bother with the rest of the books in the Demonata series. It peaked with the first two books, and the rest range from 'okay-ish' to 'poor'. Well, ...

Keep you’re head down and just do the job, my sister had always said. Your. ‘part from pointing that out, I don’t really have anything else to say that hasn’t ...

Me again. =) No real nitpicks here, so I’ll go straight into the general comments: First off, I don’t like his name either. XD I couldn’t figure out how to ...

Alrighty. =) Sorry it took me so long, but I had work to do, and then I had to move back home for the holiday, and then I found I ...

To be completely honest, I found this part of the origional to be more compelling (especially the bolded part): When Marc is separated from Nessie, a wrong turn takes her ...

w00t, Blink wrote something! =) Right, I’ll start off with a few quick observations: He came running to the bridge direly, Direly? That’s an unusual word to use. Not sure ...

And it's me again: Before I could even begin to eat, the ship began to shake and roar. Plates and spoons began to rattle and clank, creating a momentarily deafening ...

Yay, I love reading stuff by you. =) Anyway, thoughts: The sky above bristled with foreign, hostile constellations; a bitter reminder of how far I was from home and one ...

First thing first: just so you know, YWS has a 2:1 rule. That is to say, for every one story/poem you post up, should first write two reviews. This helps ...

I'm not sure how much you can compare them. I haven't read either series, but I know they're aimed at different audiences. Anne Rice's books detail with more complex ideas ...

Hey there Kaylyn. =) Caolyn walked up the woman, intending to buy it. I’m assuming you meant that she walked up TO the woman, not that she walked up the ...

Oh my, how is it that no one has commented on this yet? “It is one of the old gods,” they whispered when he stepped into the room. This is ...

She hoped it was expensive, her mother told her not to try to spend too much today. This sentence is actually grammatically incorrect. It’s what we call a comma splice, ...