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Re: Destiny -- A Harry Potter short story
I love writing Harry Potter fanfiction because I always find it so easy to write, even if I can't write anything of my own at the minute! It's something I'd ...
Apr 12, 2006 -
Re: Ayperi- Child of Wind
I really liked it, it had a sort of poetic flow to it, but at times it was a little hard to follow and the poetic quality made it sort ...
Dec 11, 2005 -
Re: September 11
When I awoke that morning to go to school, I turned on the TV and it was all over the news. I was sort of flabbergasted. Sometime later that week, ...
Nov 19, 2005 -
Re: A Diary of a Young Girl - Anne Frank
That is such a wonderful book. On Remembrance Day, I always wish that they'd show the movie instead of giving these long, boring speeches on remembering and such. Anne Frank's ...
Nov 12, 2005 -
Re: A whole new world
The plot of this story is really nice. The villain was a very well-constructed character. Your sentence structure could use some improvement, as Jennafina pointed out. One thing that confused ...
Nov 9, 2005 -
Re: Harry Potter & Inheritance- Opinions Wanted!!
I love both books, personally Harry Potter is my favourite, though I admit it is not always the best written (which is especially obvious in Half-Blood Prince). Eragon is my ...
Nov 9, 2005 -
Re: Fire's Eclipse
I love it so far. You've got a great sense of description and detail. At this moment I can't really see anything for you to improve on that anyone else ...
Nov 8, 2005 -
Re: Where I Belong; Chapter Two (13+)
It's awesome. I really like how the story is turning out. The chapters are a little short and at times it could use a little more detail. Other than that, ...
Apr 9, 2005 -
Re: Where I Belong; Prologue (13+)
I like it. Simple but pretty well written. It's understandable how some people might not like it. All depends on the person, I guess. The descriptions of the objects and ...
Apr 1, 2005 -
Re: The Journey (New name) Chapter One
I like it a lot so far :D If you decide to finish it, I think it would be really good. But at the beginning, it was sort of an ...
Mar 24, 2005 -
Re: Complicated love; Chapter Two (13+)
Wonderfully written second chapter :D I like that you take the advice of your reviewers and fix any mistakes they may point out. You surround your characters with a veil ...
Mar 7, 2005 -
Re: From the Inside Looking Out
I like it. It sounds like something from the Yukon Very Happy In case you haven't heard of the Yukon, it's a territory in Northern Canada which is very, very ...
Mar 6, 2005 -
Re: Gone Away Home: edited Chapter One
I like it- it's pretty good, but I'm not really feeling the characters emotions, you know? It's hard to explain, but they just don't seem to be feeling anything. It's ...
Mar 6, 2005 -
Re: All American Girl by Meg Cabot
I have not read it, but my friend did. She told me what it was all about, and I read the first page or so. Ever since I have wanted ...
Mar 6, 2005 -
Re: No Words Can Describe
It was really well written. I liked how all the words seemed to flow together. Usually I don't like to read poems written like this, they make me think too ...
Mar 6, 2005
